I actually commented below them and came here to say you have a delulu that can’t tell fanfic from real life. Wowza. Love the tender and thoughtful approach you have taken with this story covering difficult topics…I must have missed the part where it was also a beauty contest. Be well, there’s a button for that.
Intro / Main Riff
Bm A G F# (palm-muted power chords or full chords)
Chorus (Main Theme)
Bm A G F#
Hirogaru yami no naka kawashiatta kakumei no chigiri
(In the spreading darkness, we exchanged a vow of revolution)
Bm A G F#
Aishita yue ni mebaeta aku no hana
(Because I loved you, the flower of evil bloomed)
Bm A G F#
Kore kara saki otozureru de arou subete wo
(Everything that will come from now on)
Bm A G F# Bm
Dare ni mo jama saseru wake ni wa ikanai kara
(I won’t let anyone interfere with it)
Verse
Bm G
Kajitsu ga tsugeta mirai
(The fruit told of the future)
Bm A
Risei wo wasureta machi
(A city that forgot reason)
Bm G
Kuroku yuganda ima wo
(These black, distorted times)
D F# G A
Yume, risou ni kaeru
(Will change into dreams and ideals)
Pre-Chorus
G D F# Bm
Doushite? Boku wa kowareta meshia?
(Why? Am I a broken messiah?)
G D F#
Dare mo ga nozonda “owari” wo…
(The “end” that everyone wished for…)
Bridge / “Itsuka” Part
G A Bm A
Itsuka boku ga misete ageru
(One day I will show you)
G A#dim Bm
Hikari kagayaku sora wo
(The sky shining with light)
(Repeat similar for the final “sekai wo” – the shining world)
Interlude / Guitar Solo Section
Bm G D F# (x2)
Then heavy riff: B5 A5 etc.
@WrightJuwe Don’t, just don’t��.your words create worlds and characters that are beautiful and alive. Anyone can criticize but it takes something special to let us fall into your dream.
What’s wrong with these people, it’s free entertainment someone has poured their time and thoughts into. Writers have real lives and bills and screaming kids, jobs and stress. There is a story I love that has been going on for 3 years, every 6 months or so a chapter shows up and it’s like Christmas. Be well, write with joy, please yourself.
@WrightJuwe We can’t even get good translations of how to put your BBQ together, how could anyone expect it to understand the nuances of a complex novel.
@WrightJuwe Maybe Dean can use the turtle flutter to calm Pharm as he wakes to his body changing. Instinctively letting his body know he��s safe. That’s all I got, mash it around a bit and polish it up. 😊
Congratulations on finishing such a huge project! Don’t give up even if the publishing part becomes a bit daunting; the craftsmanship of your Ao3 work is better than much published fiction available. Your “Michener like” detail builds worlds and characters, your story will surely find a home. We believe in you, Be well.