#MakeoverMonday: 2020W46
Hyper-targeted advertising continues to disrupt the media industry.
Any feedback is welcome! #MMVizReview
Link: https://t.co/xoq5hmZPvf
14/ More periods, fewer commas
Periods mean short sentences. We like short sentences.
Commas mean long, painful sentences, which New Yorker writers think are clever, but real people find torturous, because they wind on and on without actually saying anything.
h/t @david_perell