Brad Sheridan

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

@rafi_eng101 I like how we both covered the About on our home page. This allows you to focus on the argument and solution later on #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

@AlexSmi28862926 I really like the imagery and lettering on your home page. It is very clean but also conveys a serious tone #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

After reviewing Rafi’s site, I am going to add more colored text to put an emphasis on terms, ideas, or new sections @rafi_eng101 #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

@AlexSmi28862926 thanks for reminding me to add my stasis grid to my website #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

@rafi_eng101 thanks for pointing out that the gray and white colors could definitively be neater for presentation #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

US Courts document distinguishing private from federal prisons, then comparing their methods and results https://t.co/GK0a8guKoW #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

Mass incarceration today defined by Daniel Nott https://t.co/iidEaFyVPh #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

What are the popular ideas surrounding private and federal prisons among my peers? #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

@NicFlatow , who has written on both private & federal prisons, would agree that higher incarceration rates do more harm than good #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

How can I use feedback from my CAP to create my Digital Project? How should it be organized? #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

I look forward to personalizing and creating my own design in line with my topic #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

Happy belated Thanksgiving #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

I am trying to limit repetition in my CAP, which can be hard with so many sources in agreement #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

@rafi_eng101 @justinp1011 thanks for helping me strengthen the arguments in my CAP with evidence and good structure #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

When revising, don’t be afraid to move things around. If something doesn’t fit, try moving it somewhere else before deleting it #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

@justinp1011 thank you for showing me how to use sources and great job making strong supports claims in your paper #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

@rafi_eng101 thank you for helping me develop and refine my introduction to make it stronger and great job using sources #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

https://t.co/XDab0RJGV3 learned that article and short story names should not be italicized, works of art should be #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

https://t.co/bdzsmT8X4Q reiterated that a works cited should be alphabetized and on a separate, labeled page #lyra101

[Brad Sheridan @bradENGL101]

https://t.co/Ga4Dv1goAE I learned how to format in text citations and that commas are not needed between author and page number #lyra101