brian appleby

“I’m here so I won’t get fined” - Marshawn Lynch

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

I will do a voice over through Microsoft outlook. I look to have my presentation under 5 mins by being concise on what I want to say #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

My plan to develop the LOHF presentation is to base it off my paper and then do a revised data collection part to see if there’s a difference #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

Content paper: I did well on the draft, so I added some more work that would help with the flow of the paper. #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

As I forgot to tweet last week, I will be tweeting what I did to enhance my projects for their final submission. #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

@beard_skylar Thank you, I’ll for sure look into that to help organize my final draft! #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

I feel as though this section is cluttered. Any ideas on how to make it more appealing to the eye? #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

How else can I strengthen my introduction of what LOHF is? #ENGL318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

My individual plan for revising my work is to carefully go over the material to make sure it flows smoothly and look for grammatical errors #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

For our revisions we went back and fixed some page layout issues. We also went into each section of our project and worked some wording out by either condensing it or adding to it, to make the paragraph meaning more persuadable @MuRolek #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

@KTN_TWIN Using passion in your word choices could help emphasize your point without making it too fluffy. #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

@english_mbryce I think you could condense your wording and still get your point across clearly. Also the images seem forced into their spots, so I would suggest adding a lil space for breathing room #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

@beard_skylar I think this is a great way to revise your project and it’s extremely organized as well #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

In this section I want to make it longer and at the same time want to make it more credible to the organization I decided to use (the YMCA). Such as explaining to why it might satisfy the audience and how it may impact them #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

Our plan is to strengthen our meanings within the content of our project. Make it more persuadable about what we are trying to get across #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

The one area I need to improve on is to make an outline or a draft of the paper I completing instead of just writing it out fully and submitting #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

My approach to writing in multiple styles is to make sure how I need to write. By this I look at the guidelines for the paper/project to understand who I am writing for #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

My writing process or steps are the same no matter the length of the paper or the amount of pieces there are. #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

My plan to work on my LOHF draft is to look over what needs to be incorporated and then start from basics. #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

Here is my small check list. #engl318mu

[brian appleby @brianappleby5]

My music taste ranges so I’m not too picky about what I listen to when working on things. I always listen to music so silence would bother me #engl318mu #dprgame