@8Hadfield@walmleyjssc @MrWare15 This is wonderful, Poppy! You should be really proud of yourself and all the hard work you have done over the last few months. I love how youβve illustrated this piece as well - it really finishes it off. Could we have a copy for school? π
@claspankhurst@walmleyjssc A lovely description, Lily! Itβs nice to read your work after not seeing you for so long. You can really feel the mood of the two characters - well done! ππ»
@8Hadfield @MrWare15 @OakNational@walmleyjssc Amazing, Poppy! ππ» I can really see that youβve been engrossed in this writing unit and that youβve listened carefully and used all the lovely descriptive language from across the weeks. I would like to know where the scream came from too - an excellent story opener! Great job ππ»
@8Hadfield@walmleyjssc @MrWare15 Poppy, youβve made some excellent vocabulary choices and I can really feel the atmosphere that you have created in your description - a superb effort! Well done ππ»