diagnosis: not entirely cooked! maybe a little steamed. still two weeks to get off the burner. the metaphor may have been lost a little, not unlike the points i should've accumulated on this exam...
air canada is so fucking greedy how is it that i can't change one (1) of my flights so i need to change both of them and REBOOKING the first flight costs me an additional $200 on top of the $250 to get the other flight. i originally paid 450! + tax!! you made me pay twice!!!
i think it is very chic when a fic is underrated but is beautifully and thoughtfully written and the writer finishes it anyway. hottest thing you can do is love your craft
really encourage people to get used to browsing fic in other ways than "fandom->browse by kudos->first 10 pages" like it will enrich your fic writing experience i promise. check out peoples bookmarks idk. broaden your horizons!!
fic so canada picked it almost passed for canadian except the in-universe accountant mentioned LLCs wrt tax avoidance and i started pointing and waving. we tax those as corporations buddy you will not get the flow through entity you're looking for here