'Another ghost falls from the tree as it waits for its blessing, carried on a song'
Cheltenham writer @chloevwrites in Black Bough Christmas-Winter anthology. https://t.co/93arqlQRTY
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Iβm over the moon to have a poem featured in the book π which Iβll be reading tonight as part of the open mic.
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β¨ Itβs here! β¨
Iβm over the moon to have a poem in this beautiful anthology π alongside breathtaking works from the likes of Matthew Hollis.
Edited by @ElCurwen and @MatthewMCSmith for @blackboughpoems β with artwork from @EmmaBissonnet β get it on Amazon now.
πIt's here! The Christmas-winter edition featuring distinguished author Matthew Hollis and other leading poetry luminaries. Be moved and inspired this Christmas and winter with our imagist anthology! In paperback & hardback, with art by @EmmaBissonnet π
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Well @TopTweetTuesday Iβm about to sign off from hosting duty. The quality and calibre of the work today has been startling in the most wonderful way!
Thank you to all who contributed, thank you @MatthewMCSmith for inviting me to host. Iβm off to bed with a head full of poems!
Your challenge next week - hyper condensement. Take one of your own imagistic short poems and condense it to no more than 20 words. Make it startling, retain the spirit of the original. Show the before and after (two photos). Tag us in, as usual.
Rather a reimagining than a condensing, these two feel like sisters. One, a letter to pore over, which takes its time to arrive and make its point, the other a telegram, filled with gorgeous urgency. π
Like blood droplets on crisp white snow, your condensed poem makes such an impression. There is such emotion in these trees when whittled down to the barest branches. Wonderful @anna_chorlton β₯οΈ
Ooh this is a glorious condensing! As though the spring tide itself has washed over your original poem and stolen the words back to the deep with its retreat, leaving only traces clinging to the shoreline. Wonderful work @Glenn_A_Barker
Hello @TopTweetTuesday and our guest host this week @chloevwrites π
My troubled sand is shifted and remodelled for you.
Thank you for volunteering to helm today's condensed selection. π
Trimmed expertly as towering conifers, Lesley. The brevity is still as visually satisfying and rich with colours, though I do miss the seamed scars shaded blue from the original. π¨οΈ
I love this Anthony β the shortened version is particularly vivid, and I think really benefits from keeping that lunar image at the centre, glowing in the dark. Stellar work π
This feels so expertly done Paul. A razor-sharp reduction which amplifies the beauty, grief, longing and loss of the original. Where the original is so sensory, stripping it back I think it gives it even more power in its brevity. I can almost feel the hands disconnecting.
This condensed poem is so lovely. How much meaning there is in such an everyday object, how the mug holds the very heart of the family β I think condensing this really boils it down to the very sweetest part. Lovely!
A trickier-than-it-looks brief for @TopTweetTuesday from this week's host, @chloevwrites - to condense a poem written for a previous #TTT into 20 or fewer words and in doing so hopefully distill the spirit of the original. Before and after ‡οΈ
Fabulous reduction here Anish. I think the abridged version has such power, like a lightning flash, it illuminates this moment youβve captured and its beautiful, fleeting nature β then like the rumbling storm, it moves on. Lush. βοΈ
Ooh Jai, the new life breathed into this is stunning. I love your use of spacing and line breaks in both pieces. The shorter is much more abstract, but I think the heart of it remains. I really love βblue happenedβ as the opening line too! π
Hello all at @TopTweetTuesday thank you to @chloevwrites for this fantastic challenge. I went for writing something totally new, using the essence of the poem and the words but finding something fresh inside it
I love your condensed version Robert, itβs so punchy and vivid. It feels very considered and curated, but still full of your unique voice. Wonderful work π
Ty for this delightful challenge of carving, chopping, distilling & whittling a longer imagist work down to 40 proof, 20 word shot. My poem POP presented s/by/side with original for host @chloevwrites@TopTweetTuesday@MatthewMCSmith & the @blackboughpoems crew.
I love the humour and wit in this Margaret! The condensed version certainly has a sting in its tail, thereβs so much sass in such a small package! π
For @TopTweetTuesday, @MatthewMCSmith and host with the most @chloevwrites Iβm posting my original poem ( left) and the slimmed down version ( right) which I trust meets approval! Enjoy your day, everyone!
The stripped back version of this has such heat and rhythm, that heartbeat is so present in every line. Thereβs such a sense of connection. Itβs very different from the fuller version, but deftly done. β₯οΈ
Hello all hope you are good. Here is my extra small effort describing such a big room in my life for @TopTweetTuesday hope you enjoy @chloevwrites and thanks to @MatthewMCSmith as ever.