Caroline Horsch

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

Back from break! Hope everyone had a great time :) #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@HolmgaardNadia Thank you so much for all of your comments!! I'm finding it so helpful to have all of this feedback while I'm revising #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@Lex96886075 Thanks for the feedback! You left tons of helpful notes and comments in the margins of my paper that I found super helpful #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@HolmgaardNadia I love the way your paper is organized! You start with information about sleep, and build ideas off of each other until you come to a strong and informed argument. The flow is great, it makes your paper readable and your arguments clear. Awesome job :) #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@Lex96886075 I love your topic! I know you've been struggling with sources, but I think you found some really cool ideas to investigate, like the biological brain development perspective on the issue. I'm excited to read your final paper :) #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@justinp1011 I think your thesis could be improved if it were more specific, maybe say why or how it threatens democracy. #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@justinp1011 Nice clarity and antithesis! #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@justinp1011 This is a super strong claim that really pulled me in, I definitely want to see how you defend this! #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@Lex96886075 The only place I see any need for improvement is clarity, the sentence is a little bit hard to read #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@Lex96886075 I think this has really strong specificity and uniqueness! #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@Lex96886075 This is super interesting! I really like the biological perspective! #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@KharbandaLiam I think you could improve the clarity a little! #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@KharbandaLiam This has strong uniqueness and antithesis! #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@KharbandaLiam This is a strong thesis statement! I would definitely be curious to read this paper. #thesiscriteria #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@rafi_eng101 Your letter has some awesome arguments in it! They were super clear and effective. #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@rafi_eng101 Thanks for the feedback! I went back and filled out my introduction a little more :)

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@ciccone1_paul You found really great evidence in support of affirmative action and put it all together such that the sources support each other. #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@AutumnEng101 Your analysis sections are seriously awesome, you really get into the construction of the argument and evaluate it's effectiveness, sometimes resulting in the determination that a source is not that credible after all. #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@Naveen17021214 People in economics, sociology, and politics might be having some great discussions about your topic #lyra101

[Caroline Horsch @chorsch101]

@Naveen17021214 Awesome and important topic! There is such a big conversation happening about this, and so many strong opinions on what the "best" system is. I'm excited to see what your research into this reveals.