Young Adult fantasy author, journalist, horseback rider, dog lover, fitness for stress relief, believer, wife, mother of three, ACFW Carol Award Finalist
Enemies-to-lovers YA portal fantasy Captured by elves, Briella discovers she's both elf and mage. To save her life, she bargains to help defeat the invaders, but she must decide if she'll risk it anyway to save the prince and find where she truly belongs. #questpit#Q#YA#F#RF
@mjvalentour@heatherdgilbert I was just thinking about this today! I care more about a character if Iโve seen the pre-inciting incident life. But also considered cutting the first three chapters of my novel today. ๐คทโโ๏ธ
@LeannaRapier@Strangeland_Elf Right. There are some things Iโm changing like hand soaps, laundry detergents and not microwaving plastic, but Iโm still microwaving in glass. And I try to use avocado and olive oil but Iโm not freaking out about canola. All we can do is the best we can do!
@HeatherCashman Wonderful episode! I tend to use a lot of eye descriptors in my early drafts. This had some great suggestions on how to replace with setting or inner dialogue, etc to cut some of it out of dialogue.