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@engl101oliviab I agree. I like the use that she says "in this paper I will..." but the fact that she says it twice is confusing and repetitive. I like the use once at the beginning of the paper #flamm101

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I use quotes in my sentences as they do. The writers use way better vocabulary than I do. #flamm101

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Evan used a historical reference about MLK’s speech and Sarah’s paper was a personal story about her grandmother. #flamm101

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working on counterargument -- see doc #flamm101

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By looking at the advances in advertising evolve into storytelling we can see that modern consumers have high expectations for their ads; this is important because consumers are becoming a worse judge of what is being marketed and at filtering for the purpose of the information

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My strategy for cultivating exigence is to use the commercials I seen on TV and describe what they mean. Hopefully, people will recognize the commercials, as they are popular and emotionally connect with them which will capture their attention. #flamm101

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Sample 2:
3. I would recommend including a rhetorical question at the end of a paragraph or two. This keeps the reader engaged as it makes them think as well as want to read more to potentially find the answers to this question.

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Sample 2:
2: Social media can translate to legislative decisions.

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sample 2:
1. The author expresses urgency by beginning right away with a true story. The incorporation of tweets added to the urgency of the topic.

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Sample 1:
3. I would include more rhetorical questions. I find this is an effective way to get your point across as well as regain the reader's attention.

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Sample 1:
2. Social media can negatively affect a person's mental health.
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sample 1:
1. The writer expresses a sense of urgency by describing a story that leads to their thesis. The story clearly depicts and illustrates the topic that the author is talking about. The author expresses this by starting opening with a quote that grabs attention.
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@engl101Mendries you could focus specific group of people who work in the media industry, not just the industry overall. media industry is very broad, so it may be hard to have an effective and specific enough inquiry if you do not slim the search down.

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@engl101hannahb You could say: The previous quote is extremely unique because it enables the reader to apply two different rhetorical appeals including ethos and pathos.

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HELP!

Looking for advice on how to clear up the following sentence:

"By Cote incorporating this section of research done by Althaus, she is adding an element of credibility to her article which results in the reader having more trust in her work."

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10 Verbs:

analyzes, discusses, crying, begins, integrated, criticize, addresses, portrays, convey, expresses

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