@abxxai@Image1 I love this! Let me try to recreate it with a different product and my avatar. I would also like to try a different setting. Will be back
AUDIO: Close-miked plain everyday American English over birdsong and a mower stopping at 12.5s. One ring at 21s. Do not improvise extra dialogue. After the last word room tone only as the frame holds.
DIALOGUE: She says exactly this and nothing more: "Good morning to you too. Morning. The lawn looks incredible. Hey you. Yeah I am walking now. Yes I will be there in fifteen minutes."
15-21s silent walking then slowing then stopping to tilt her head back at the sky and smile. 21-22.5s her phone rings and she lifts it to her ear screen away from lens. 22.5-27s she walks again as she talks. 27-30s silent walking to the corner.
4.5-7.5s sees the cat crouches offers her hand and it pushes into her fingers as she speaks. 7.5-12s silent scratching its chin then standing and walking on as the mowing man comes into frame. 12-15s she calls over and he stops the mower and raises a hand.
SCENE: Quiet suburban street. A house with front steps. No text. CAMERA: Smooth handheld chest height moving with her. No cuts. BEATS: Twenty beats of 1.5 seconds. Beat 1 she draws breath then steps out. 0-4.5s out the front door pulls it shut and down the steps.
VOICE: Female late twenties. Plain everyday American English as spoken in California. CAST: An older man mowing a lawn behind her who never speaks. One orange tabby cat on a low wall. Correct anatomy. Four legs. One cat. Only her voice.
Can someone share what is the perfect way to get a script that makes sense. I did a good scenario but i am still not happy with the speech part.
What is your go to for fixing this issue?