@ryanclinton It’s not so much a typo as a misuse—or at least, I’d have written forgo (do without) instead of forego (go before). I’ve just been quoting it as written.
@jweisel@ryanclinton Interesting! Things seem to run pretty smoothly in Minnesota. Argument is typically 3-4 months after the reply briefs is filed. I’m sure the volume of cases is far smaller.
@legalwritingpro@CecereCarl@DavidLat @BrianWToth Yes. This is in part why I struggle to use contractions in briefs. It seems too easy to sound snarky or flippant.
@legalwritingpro@nytimes Confirmed suggests that the appellate court gathered more evidence to be sure the jury was right. That’s why affirmed is better.
@dtoddsmith One book I haven’t seen listed so far is Joseph Williams, Style: Toward Clarity and Grace. Bought it used, learned a lot about connecting ideas sentence-to-sentence.
@GrammarTable@akellyucc I voted “and, while” because the while clause reads like an aside. You could almost set it off with em-dashes. I think that should override the usual comma-between-independent-clauses rule.
@JeffLewisLaw Kisor v Wilkie says: “Agency regulations can sometimes make the eyes glaze over. But hard interpretive conundrums, even relating to complex rules, can often be solved.” This is a conundrum, but we think it can be solved.
@dtoddsmith I can't use the whirlybird either! My first step is like yours. Then I outline the argument by hand on paper. Next I write the brief front-to-back, maybe skipping the Intro. Last, edit. First and last steps take the longest.