#Mafin fic: no body, no crime
2k words, rated T
Based on the promo for ep 206, Marta contemplates murder, because she is a De La Reina after all.
https://t.co/D11vWBSm2g
@heartsneedabeat it does feel like the show would work better if Annie was going into her final year of undergrad, and was stressing about a final year internship or grad/MBA program, rather than high school worrying about a summer camp lol. Everything makes more sense if they're 21-23
@heartsneedabeat I get wanting to tell Dona Clara that her son was a piece of shit, but like....wouldn't that involve confessing to KILLING A MAN and burying his body on Marta's property???? unless they plan to lie about how the blackmail happened, which definitely wouldn't backfire....
@heartsneedabeat Yes, but like.... there are points where you can stop and miss out on the weird writing near the end (due to pandemic + maternity leave)
@heartsneedabeat Hey Pelayo, and I mean this with the entirely of my heart sir, please get entirely fucked, my guy.
I want this man to regret every single one of his life choices, and then I want Clara to smack him over the head
fandom: the show didn't spend enough time on Fina's trauma about the jail arc😡
SDL: shows Fina basically having a panic attack around a man who knows her secret out of fear of going back to jail, and then reacting emotionally/angrily to Marta about it
fandom: this show sucks😡
@heartsneedabeat The writers try to give them the big romantic scenes of Mafin, sometimes following almost identical beats, but they really just fall flat without the insane chemistry. It's just..... *sad trombone noise*