off the record - ch 1
#beomjun - fuckbuddies, tattoo artist cyj x office worker cbg
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Can I just say how nice it is of you to post these tips?? ππ I've always wanted to write a fic but have been too intimidated so its β you have no idea how many threads are sitting in my drafts whenever these topics pop up on my tl. i always end up dial..
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unsolicited advice and no one probably cares but it's actually more than okay, highly encouraged even, to just use the word said all throughout your story. trying to force multiple different synonyms just to avoid repeating it often makes writing feel tacky, strained, and jargony
THANK YOU THANK YOU for the archer prey bmjn updates !! im shivering in my seat. the meal so good i β fuckkkk i wish i could see those cake omggggg that is the sweetest thing ever pls let me have a bite!!!
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archer, prey bmjn mentioned !! ππ i miss them sm too, and if u dont mind, can we get some lil updates on what r they up to β¦ β helllooo!!!!!!!!!! i will absolutely get back to you on this!!!!sgsjsksl";$!#( iβm actually going to quote this tweet later β¦ https://t.co/NWFPyUcfTg
eye contact, or any other action tells you everything you need to know about the subtext and tension of the room. simplicity always carries emotional weight.
unsolicited advice and no one probably cares but it's actually more than okay, highly encouraged even, to just use the word said all throughout your story. trying to force multiple different synonyms just to avoid repeating it often makes writing feel tacky, strained, and jargony
TO ALL LOOKING FOR THE SITE ITS: https://t.co/7U7uyBIwcE
it has over 300 synonyms organized by feeling/situation! iβve been using it for 5 years no joke LMAO
relying on action beats rather than fancy dialogue tags is what allows the scene to actually breathe. it helps ground the characters in their physical space. instead of telling the reader how someone spoke through a thesaurus heavy verb, letting them shift their weight, break
same anon jesus christ never mind please never let beomgyu make a decision ever again man i take it all back β uh... uhm...... err.. https://t.co/3jadl9KhoI
hii you can delete/ignore this ask but i just saw a tiny error in chap8 and thought u might want to fix it -
βDo my brotheβ¦ β fuckfyckifuckfuck re-reading this multiple times to realize my atrociousness in using verbs what the fuck my goodness, do myβ¦ https://t.co/BgFRNQuBQ3
i honestly don't know if i'm valid for this, for siding with beomgyu (despite the fact that the poor man is not even sidingβ¦ β you feelings are valid. itβs completely natural to see the human vulnerability in bg. he is terrified, and when you're lookiβ¦ https://t.co/WoGjt3lLtk
https://t.co/FlAUesjkRx otr bg is real and his name is kizzuna β sometimes i have to just chuckle and completely ignore the underlying and foreboding meaning of this.... https://t.co/m3wHhkNjY9
just clocked 13 hrs at work without a break, talked to roughly 300 different people, did a grocery run, and went out for dinner with my sister. atp, setting a weekly update deadline for otr is a form of self-sabotage (otr bg this is your fault)
https://t.co/ES4oGW40rs - okay, i made a tiny HUGE mess, aoijdioad. i'm so sorry!! i got way too β¦ β itβs totally okayyyyy, pls donβt worry! i completely understand, and you have nothing to be embarrassed about. consider the β¦ https://t.co/mVPMOztWKQ
OMFG IβM SO HYPER ULTRA MEGA ANXIOUS FOR THE SNIPPETS HELP
so rry for showing up this excited;;; but ever since the firstβ¦ β oh my gosh hold on!!!!! first of all, please never apologize for being excited, i absolutely love the energy and knowing howβ¦ https://t.co/IwezhYLYGo
ugh I feel bad about how I talked about bg earlier I'm sorry πππππ (like genuinely I'm so sorry if you felt bad about ehaβ¦ β pls don't apologize i should be the one saying iβm sorry, i felt like i shouldn't have policed your feelings like that. oβ¦ https://t.co/UdG3AjqnQx
HI HI HI HI, IM DONEE WITH MY TESTS, PRESENTATIONS AND ASSIGNMENTS!! AND EVENTHO I SAID IM GONNA READ OTR TODAY, guiltily, β¦ β CONGRATULATIONS ON FINISHING YOUR TESTS, PRESENTATIONS, AND ASSIGNMENTS clear schedule, clear mind, you absolutely earned thβ¦ https://t.co/D6DKeqp1CT