If you are an FFXIV account and you see me posting under your shit yes I am addicted to the game and yes I do have a character and he is not at all even a little bit a vampire you can trust him (that is not blood it is wine I promise)
@Jessssuhh@CHRISF0GLE "pools of sapphire" instead of just saying "blue eyes." People who can't write meaningful content end up trying to camouflage the shittiness with pretty words.
Don't even get me started on the smut writers.
@Jessssuhh@CHRISF0GLE Waxing poetic in narrative has its time and place but when you're purposefully subverting simplicity for the sake of trying to sound artistic or intelligent you're only doing a disservice to yourself. People don't fall in love with characters because the narrator kept saying -