Vox X Divergent
Inside the fence, a dictator wants young malleable citizens. A virus conveniently provides. The Underground has other plans and Cam, who is anything but malleable gets pulled into the organization’s fight. #questpit#YA#Q
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YA Dystopian The Marrow Thieves meets The Last of Us.
The fence was built to keep them safe. 16 yr. old Cam, an orphan and a loner, finds herself pulled into an organization of teens searching for a gov’t depository, the truth, and impetus for revolution.
@ToriRWeed YA book is clean except for the pov character in chapter 8 who drops 5 f-bombs interjected with a repetitive action. It works, but not sure if it should stay. Milder words would not be as effective… I tried🙄
@sarareadauthor I do this too. I also write out of order which makes it even worse. But I can almost always remember where things are…not sure what that says about me.
@SWHannahAuthor I write completely out of order. Once I’ve put the scenes in order, I can see what needs to be filled in. In order doesn’t work for me.
@EdMcDonaldTFK @writes_isa I’m trying Scrivener right now. It’s easier to move things around and since I write out of order it might be an advantage but I’m probably going to go back to Word as I find it less complicated.