I hope to finish today or tomorrow but honestly idk sigh. Unlike all my previous drafts I haven't read what I've written at all which means it's entirely possible I'll end up rewriting a lot
Btw trying to finish the chappie. I decided to merge the content of 26 and 27 into the same chap. It's not going very well but eh. Hopefully I can get it up before the end of the week
Idk what do you guys think. Do you want the flavor reveal next few chaps or later. And if next few chaps would you prefer it as part of a smilk spirals monologue or as a "oh yeah thats my name" when nilla inevitably asks about the "cream x cookie" in the library
Thinking about how to write the new chappie and whether I should reveal smilk's flavor now as part of the arc closing or save it for sometime later in a more dramatic context or something
Like I think I could make both appear naturally in the narration I just dk if it feels too early for this reveal. Also bc if it's revealed in ch26 it's going to appear near the start of the chappie, which would make it less impactful than if you put it at the end
ALSO I would not be too worried about lily being cut from the story entirely due to the reincarnation taking a long time. They've been playing with time this whole time the future lily who's finished her journey is probably going to end up portaling to the current timeline or smt
//crk spoilers
I pretty much didn't look at the leaks past that one line about being reborn over and over again so I was able to get an authentic experience.
Writing and pacing are pretty decent this ep. Especially the last couple bits were very very tasty.
If anyone is interested in what kind of nightmare fuel I was making. 2nd image is the sketch version which is a lot better. "I'm gonna add line weight" you summoned a demon or some shit what the fuck
So like I was doodling the complementary smilk version. And I was like yeah this looks great and then I went to sleep. And then I woke up just now and looked at it again and holy fucking jumpscare that shit is terrifying what was I thinking