@Eric_ENGL398R This is something that took me a long time to figure out! I eventually googled it and one of the first links that came up walked me through how to do it #engl398r
(2/2) The use of commas in this sentence are extremely effective and incredibly engaging because it takes the reader on a journey that is as detailed and sporadic it feels to retrieve old memories
(1/2) "There was a garden, a hole in the fence, a grandfather who had no religion— one can run through the holes in memory, wearing a wet hat, onto the sidewalk covered with puddles, and there are fingers in them." - Lyn Hejinian, My Life #engl398r
My first recommendation is to assign tasks based on individual skills, so that every group member feels they have tasks they can complete well #engl398r
An insight from Picturing the Hybrid Form is that drawing can be a very useful part of the writing process- it can remind you of important details and can help you develop the plot #engl398r
@ChenMenashe7 taught me about the gap year between high school and college that is taken by many Jewish students. I especially learned a lot about the program Kivunim and their philosophies about growth and change #engl398r
The reading "Crowding and leaping" taught me that, while it is important to write with a lot of detail, the information that you purposely leave out is just as important #engl398r
I am also planning to look into the effects of chronic illness on young people, as well as the high prevalence of chronic migraines among women #engl398r
Moore encourages writers to use dialogue because "so much of what makes a person distinctive is the words that he or she uses, and the ways in which particular words are used" (page 30) #engl398r