It’s ok to be slim, it’s ok to be chubby, it’s ok to not have a cut jawline, it’s ok to not have the finest clothes, it’s ok to not be athletic, it’s ok to be single, it’s ok to have acne, it’s ok to have stretch marks, it’s ok to have anything bc YOURE HANDSOME AND BEAUTIFUL ILY
@Frankekka_ But for colored pieces, most mangakas will change the color of their lineart. Also, the choker showing through the hair doesn’t make a lot of sense. I don’t mean to offend at all! My criticism comes from a place of love
@Frankekka_ Also, I have a few crits for you if you don’t mind! Try using a brown liner. This piece is meant to be very cutesy and the black hardens it. It’s evident you are trying to emulate a more anime or manga-ish style,