Navya Sharma

✧.* Full-time student and multimedia composition enthusiast :-) ✧.*

Shout-out 209 fam!

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@YueYao383252 Expanding on my last response, a more nuanced use of sound effects and music might have helped in clarifying the project's stance and enhancing its emotional resonance. Still, a thought-provoking piece! #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@YueYao383252 The exploration of AI's impact on nature is compelling, but the narrative feels a bit lost in translation. The visuals are strong, but the audio needed to do more of the heavy lifting to convey the emotional weight I think! Good work overall though : ) #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@ssa161rutgers This is so well put together. You have a beautiful voice for narration, by the way : - ) I think you could have made your message even more impactful by adding some background music that conveys the emotions you're attempting to invoke within viewers! #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@ssa161rutgers The way you painted an analogy here between the act of dealing with PCOS and the act of maintaining a car is brilliant. I especially LOVE the moment where you mentioned that dealing w/ PCOS is not a "straight-forward road" & then showed a car navigating a curved road. #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@ssa161rutgers This is so beautiful and personable. . . Genuinely. As a woman myself, it really is rough out here. . . I don't personally deal with PCOS, but from the way you've conveyed it here through your project, I can channel the pain and frustration of those who do. Well done! #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@KhushiChok209 I think the images you sprinkled throughout (such as the skeptical baby meme) added humor to your work but I was a little confused as to their correlation to your underlying theme/message. Additionally, the music you chose complemented your video well! Great job! #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@KhushiChok209 Love how you mirrored the journey of a baby learning how to walk for the first time with that of an individual learning to ski for the first time. The footage closely parallels the narration despite them being about two different subjects—i.e. you connected them well! #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@KhushiChok209 This was a very cute, wholesome, and feel-good movie that *also* happened to be very deep and meaningful. You successfully catered to both the average person looking for a wholesome film to watch, AND to the multimedia student. Nicely done there! #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@spellskayla The random snapshots and text highlighting tradition and evolution is brilliant and helps viewers draw the connection between the creative title and theme of your work : - ) #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@spellskayla I love the amalgamation of random clips of you driving! I think it really sets the tone for a casual yet meaningful discussion. I wonder who the second individual is whose voice you used (you?).I was intrigued yet curious as to the correlation b/w the video & audio 🤔 #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@spellskayla I think it's really neat how you are sort of a 209 'pioneer' in the sense of being the first person in this cohort (from what I've seen, at least)to talk directly into the camera AND have the authors/philosophers we've covered in this class be the subject of your work!#videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

Thank you for all your helpful feedback throughout all the projects and assignments, 209 gang!! They really helped me polish and refine my work into something greater 🫶 POV me to my fellow peer reviewers rn 😁

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@BasicW_Maxwell Your proj. reminded me that r/Reality is as much about what we remember as it is about what we experience.The blend of personal memory with cultural exploration challenges us to reconsider the narratives we hold about family & the ties that bind us across time & space.#videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@BasicW_Maxwell You beautifully captured the bittersweet essence of family & memory, blending personal narrative with reflections on a significant cultural journey to go beyond typical storytelling format. Mary Ruefle would appreciate the way you honor the fleeting nature of moments! #videoparty

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

LET'S GOOO LTMP No.2 is FINALLY here‼️ Enjoyy 🥳 Hope y'all have as much fun watching this as I did making it! #LTMPNo2

https://t.co/42Ldf97kUI

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@KhushiChok209 It's clear how your anti-lecture is meant to convey the struggles and beauties of growth, change, and learning. I'd recommend adding more sound effects for dramatic emphasis and meaningful images that relate to the theme of growth and learning rather than memes. #peerreview3

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@KhushiChok209 . . . while simultaneously showing footage of a mother fastening her baby's boots! That's very clever and helps us to see the correlation b/w the visual and audio components. The background music also compliments the light-hearted mood and atmosphere very well.(2/2) #peerreview3

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@KhushiChok209 Fantastic job with the parallelism . . . wow. The way you strategically mirrored the actions you were describing with the actions being performed in the footage is amazing. E.g. You stated that skiiers should first gear up and wear their skiing boots . . . (1/2) #peerreview3

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@NennaJohn I would revise your project to better fit the theme of 'anti-lecture,' as the lecture aspect (gym routine) feels more like a tutorial. Maybe add more juxtaposing elements to your work. Logistics-wise I do like your video quality and sound quality—good job on that! #peerreview3

[Navya Sharma @navyasdigidiary]

@NennaJohn I find it interesting how your narration is so monotonous and straight-forward. I think you can maybe leverage this in some capacity—for example, consider adding dull or sinister music in the background to match or compliment your narration. #peerreview3