characters confessing their love:
★★★★☆
characters accidentally screaming "BECAUSE I LOVE YOU!" in the middle of a heated argument:
★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★
★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★
“I would kill for you.” “I would die for you.”
Yeah, well, I would heal for you. I’d unlearn my toxic patterns, face my wounds, and become a healthier person so my love doesn’t hurt you.
writing tips: show don't tell (or show and tell a little bit)
ini tuh artinya kalian nunjukin apa yang characters rasain lewat actions mereka. feelings don't always have to be named, let the actions speak for themselves.
contoh :
hugs are actually so underrated especially those hugs that are so tight you can literally feel the other person's heartbeat and for a moment everything feels so calm and safe like nothing can hurt you
my favorite kind of intimacy is when two people start using each other’s random phrases and mannerisms without even realizing it. you just wake up one day and realize you speak a little bit of their language.
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