Shivam Patel

Senior at Rutgers University.
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[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

just finished submitting the last assignment for this class...it feels surReal

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

#hwa8 the way Ashley put these tweets together actually makes sense...HOW

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

its 209. just do it. #hwa8

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

preaaachhhh🫣

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

#LTMPno2
#peaceisfake
https://t.co/hhDkCz1C1B

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#mmcw
istg 209 made me do more work than 400 level math classes

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

#mmcw
dont be fooled. multimedia composition actually means COMPOSING MULTIMEDIA

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#mmcw
Ashley made us cram out 400 tweets just for her to look at the number on our Twitter pages to see if we hit it #playedyoself

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#mmcw
Reality isn’t reality but reality is Reality
#makeitmakesense

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#mmcw
multimedia composition put the emphasis on MULTImedia. so so so many forms of media i never knew about😪

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#mmcw
Ashley’s happy moods duped me into thinking material was gonna be happy…still not over hwa5😒

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

#mmcw
209 taught me that everything I thought I knew is non-fiction and isn’t Real

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@hefferon_l97705 #peerreview4
The only thing I could think that you could work on before the final project is stabilizing the video recording of the screen, however if you aimed for that then it is planned good.

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

@hefferon_l97705 Nothing distracted from the message of the project. Eveything seems to be planned out and created seamlessly #peerreview4

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

@hefferon_l97705 This draft successfully attempts to debunk the notion of ‘lecture’. At first, I didn’t believe so since the audio and visuals were synced, however later in the project (i.e. at 1:43), there is a different audio that shows the reality of what social media does to us #peerreview4

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

@hefferon_l97705 Immediate and gut response: Nothing needs to be cut from this project. In addition, nothing needs to be added #peerreview4

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

@hefferon_l97705 The message of this project is that social media is harmful for its users. #peerreview4

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@209doglover #peerreview4
The most important thing the creator could edit between now and the final draft are the visual components. The creator could use different visuals to debunk experthood and lecture more efficiently

[Shivam Patel @shivampatel209]

@209doglover The draft tries debunking 'experthood' by questioning what sleep is and what type of sleep we are experiencing. At the end of the video the creator says "take a moment to ask..." which signals that he considers r/Reality as a construct, not truth/false
#peerreview4

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@209doglover #peerreview4
Immediate and gut response: I don't think anything needs to be cut or added from this project. There is a good amount of visual components, however some of them seem to allign with the audio rather than flipping lecture on its head.