This is how I cut intros using storytelling that builds curiosity and keeps people watching.
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One editing lesson that instantly upgraded my storytelling:
Stop treating music like background noise.
Every track has:
• Build-ups
• Climaxes
• Transitions
• Resolutions
If those moments are hidden under dialogue, you're wasting emotional impact.
Great editing isn't selecting a track.
It's restructuring the track so its best moments support the story.
leaving my honest review and revision for this edit.
the intro, it looks good but you can add a tv screen reflective look on the tv to make it more retro or realistic, on 0:08 sec "30 day game plan" the text anim thing with the graph is not good tbh you can remove that, on the graph "$10k/Month" could have been a bit more bigger in size, on 0:17 sec this stock png is now out of trend so please do not use it again, on 0:20 sec he say's "First of all" and on 0:25 sec he again say's "First of all" you can remove the 0:25 sec "First of all", on 0:32 sec i liked this hand shake b roll, good choice. and for the last revision, on 0:37 sec the zoom out can be a bit more smooth. that's all keep practicing, going good.
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Most editors choose the right music.
Pro editors choose the right PARTS of the music.
A huge mistake is letting important musical moments happen underneath dialogue.
When the music swells, changes, or resolves, give it room to breathe.
Think of editing like a duet:
Dialogue speaks.
Music responds.
That's how scenes start feeling cinematic.
@AbdakaHeri77594 You don't need an editor you need impressions on this tweet, I've already messaged you, no seen, no replies, your whole account is about hiring an editor this and that.