#nashuri I'm still somebody daughter by https://t.co/7AuXoRATet
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He paused when he saw her. His Shuri wasn't looking brighter then the sun her eyes were hallow her clothes were tattered old shirt and bonnet. She looked like she hadn't slept in days.
"realistic dialogue slop" is so silly as a criticism. The issue is so clearly bad direction. You can tell they told the VA: "Listen to this song and act confused by it."