@IvoryDea101 The first paragraph could use an extra adjective before "thing." Such as; gross, nasty, or pathetic. An intensifying adverb would also work wonders here like "such a little thing."
also in paragraph two you use "on" instead of "in" but is otherwise perfect.
@IvoryDea101 Line one is good, line two could use the word "you" at the beginning, and line three is a bit clumsy but overall its pretty nice! and the sache over the lower pussy region is a tastefull cencor that still leaves a lot of ass to worship. good work!
@MotherOfTechdom idk what mother/misware/lckdwns is and idk why the site is down rlly ur post is hard for me to understand for me for some reason idk maybe im jsut too puppy