I’ve always been a little self conscious about that scene in he’s the alpha where hj and flx make out in the club and hj can’t tell who he is because I thought it was a bit of a stretch
last night I got drunk in a way that i can now confidently say it’s perfectly plausible
como van a bardear a lxs francesxs por estar calientes por favor imaginenselos sentandose a comer con m1lei y k4rina me da ganas de vomitar mira si les voy a reclamar algo a ellxs
to be very transparent with you because why not we’re all in this together there’s still half of this chapter sitting on my camera roll but the scene that follows what I already posted is so crucial and I’m so self conscious about how I wrote it that I’m having second thoughts
@orapanda1 Yes exactly, I think I wrote that particular scene draft without considering the final direction I want for the story and that’s why it felt out of place