@ReadsDesi I don't want it to sound unrealistic or better said, that the story itself has like an overly dramatic or clichet like tone. Perhaps also a simple feedback content wise if it's attractive to the audience, too short or too long, style wise, that would be really helpful
I have finished my greek mythology vmin fanfic with great difficulties, but I have. It's going to be my last fanfic, as I intend to exit the fandom when everything is posted. For now, I am looking for a beta reader who would be interested in helping me edit it +
@ReadsDesi Hey, thanks for replying! So I must give notice that English isn't my first language and I wanted to sit down with someone with expertise to correct the language mistakes - what I am think is more needed here is the content and perception of the story.
One important thing: this is my interpretation of Ares' and Aphrodite's relationship. In the real myths they were very toxic and constantly cheated on each other. I changed a lot in the myth for plot as well, so do not be surprised that it's not 1 on 1 the same
This whole story is basically a story about how shit Jimin's life is and how he longs for death although he's an immortal. If you're interested in that kind of a promt, write in the comments if you'd like to beta read.
#ARMYsAgainstViolence#ARMYsAgainstAbusers#A
Content warnings: violence and rape. The rape isn't explicit in any way and doesn't happen between Tae and jimin. The one scene I do write a bit explicitly stops before anything serious happens. If you're uncomfortable with that, I advise you not to read it
@outro_tear07 Me too, out of protest I also willingly don't want to... But the ugly twinge when listening to their music leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I don't think I'll ever be able to listen to it again...
@mandarinnnnno Honestly, yes. The saddest part is that I genuinely like their music, but every time I listen to it now, I don't feel well. Especially after this deftening silence, I can't forgive them and will probably leave the fandom in short time
@Wicked_toria I have been writing a fic for over a year now, nearly done, it would have been my best story. But now, I can't finish it. Every time I try, I feel disgusted with myself. Which is a shame, because I've been working on it for so long... Maybe one day I will make it
@kei_heestan @whatsinanameomg @imillilikeyou By that logic we shouldn't use any apps, or any mobile device at all, because all owners of all businesses are literally men with a criminal record
@maisonface@imillilikeyou I don't think that she sees them therapists but that she just felt betrayed that after being violated in that way that the group she loved actually doesn't gaf. Especially in the case of bts, who have done things to grow close to their fandom (run bts, fanmeetings) some don't do
@whatsinanameomg @imillilikeyou A woman has just opened up about the most traumatic experience a woman could have and was vulnerable in front of us. The way she coped about it was hers to decide, especially if it's as out of control as it was in her case. And you dare criticise her about it.