If your story feels “off”…
but you can’t explain why..
That’s usually where readers drop off.
Be honest:
Do YOU know what’s not working in your draft right now?
Yes or no?
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Your writing isn’t the problem.
Your story just isn’t holding attention.
Be honest....
Where do you think readers start losing interest in your draft?
First page, chapter 3, or later?
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@KR_Ludlow Love that, sunshine, daisies, and totally harmless trolls
That said, I’m exactly the kind of beta reader who’ll still clock pacing dips, character inconsistencies, and where the hook might slip.
If you’re open to sharp, honest feedback, I’d be happy to take a look.