TThe dialogue feels unnatural.
Or the reader simply doesn't have a question they need answered.
Sometimes you can be too close to your own manuscript to notice these https://t.co/Idc0khGzQD's too much information before the story actually begins.
what would become of me next nobody would know, not even myself. The last thing remember was the bugs.... disgusting multi-legged creatures crawling their way up my limbs. The sound the pitter patter made, the little needles moving their way across my body. I wasn't scared.
OCr total domination?Kar?
Vids?
Bacation?
Susiness?
Havings?
Bouse?
Ie honest with yourself...
Uf R 200,000 was delivered to your doorstep right now, would it actually change your life... or just upgrade your problems?
nited kingdom No scams. No lies. Just real talk.
I havenโt been wanting to exist lately. Wellโฆfor a long time. I continue to get out of bed because I have to. I look in the mirror and Iโm not happy with who Iโm looking at. Itโs not easy but it doesnโt stop me from believing one day Iโll be happy again.