Justin S

[Justin S @WebJms]

Beginning to record my presentation of my final LOHF Web analysis now! This is a first for me with any online course I have taken at Millersville. I’m excited to see how it will turn out, and I hope I can convey my ideas and content in a way that will appeal and stick! #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

I look forward to continuing to work with the teammates in my group to complete & put the final touches on our Media Consciousness Business Guide! Such great ideas and advice we have come up with. Creating good content is the number one priority for me with web writing #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

Started to add page numbers and a table of contents to my Analysis of the LOHF Facebook page, which also includes great visuals of all the data I have collected over the course of this semester! #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

It has been great to incorporate what I’ve learned in this course about creating content online to my final “What is Content?” Theory paper and how I incorporated that into my final projects as well. #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

@JohnLutz99 Looks great! The left side may need some kind of label to help the reader understand what all’s being depicted. Other than, looks good! #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

@samrowless That’s a great idea! That actually gave me some ideas to add what I learned throughout the semester with our projects to my final draft as well #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

@KatieWe53788347 Add a homemade logo, or like some others recommended, the LOHF logo! The font could look a little better too! #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

@mumu14697093 Definetly add an explanation to the charts. That context will help the reader better understand what is being shown #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

I want to also add more examples to my content strategy section of the LOHF Assignment. It will make it easier to read and provide more insight to the topic at hand. #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

My second part of my LOHF revision is to add visuals to my guide. In particular I want to use graphs to show the data I collected. #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

The first part of my revision for my LOHF project is to add more to my executive summary, introduction and conclusions! #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

@english_mbryce Wow that looks great! I like it. I think the font is fine honestly. That makes me want to add one to mine, thank you. #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

@bmutt46 I would say add some examples to it! I like the design and layout of your guide though! Great job!

[Justin S @WebJms]

@lilsalami18 You need to add something more to it that will really “capture” the reader. That way it will look more visually captivating

[Justin S @WebJms]

@asmacck I personally like charts, that’s what I’d be using for my Assignment. I say go for it! #engl318mu

[Justin S @WebJms]

The final revision for our guide is to enhance the style of our guide. We must put all the introductions, text, visuals, examples and conclusions into a style that is both easy to follow and visually appealing. That makes a great guide! #engl318mu @asmacck @BrendanReese2

[Justin S @WebJms]

Harking back to my first revision, the third revision to our project will include combing visuals, text and examples. This is an efficient way to diviulge the reader into the text and incorporate context and content into the guide. #engl318mu @asmacck @BrendanReese2

[Justin S @WebJms]

A second revision for our project will be to include a proper introduction and a proper conclusion. This will make it seem more official and give it a proper opening and closer# #engl318mu @asmacck @BrendanReese2

[Justin S @WebJms]

Our first revision for the Media Consciousness Business Guide will be to break down our existing text, so the reader can better understand our points, and include visuals with the advice we are talking about. #engl318mu @asmacck @BrendanReese2

[Justin S @WebJms]

What I would recommend for the Business Guide is to keep in mind user experience because that way you will make your website easier for users to navigate & if you have reconginzable features that make the user feel like they’ve been there before they will want to stay #engl318MU