@lea_web maybe adding a header that would inform the viewer a to what they are seeing. if there's just a collection of posts the viewer may get confused. #engl318mu
@Mikie53585867 one of the things that I can suggest is changing the format around a little bit. Maybe go with something that creates a flow throughout your content rather than a division. #engl318mu
@Alicia35808214 one of the things that I would think of is maybe displaying this as a graph. By having a visual of this instead may help to bring the viewer into the presentation rather than overwhelm them with words. #engl318mu
@GroftAlexa I feel like one of the things that you can do to add more style is to carry over some of that fun typography of the image into some of your headings. #engl318mu
@Galong93230677 I think that the layout of the information works very well here. I would maybe think about condensing some of the information a little bit or maybe adding some visuals. #engl318mu
@stephengl318mu One of the things that you guys have done well here is making a design that reads well. I do think maybe adjusting the color combos could be beneficial to add a little more contrast. #engl318mu
My group plans on working on the overall flow of our business guide. at this point in time, the points are all over the place and can be organized to flow better #engl318mu
When writing in multiple styles I like to make sure that I have a variation with my vocabulary and grammar. I feel like adjusting the tone of the piece can be very easy with the use of correct grammar and vocabulary. #engl318mu
the first step with my writing process is to make sure that I have my snacks ready. Having all my snacks on deck will prevent me from leaving my workspace. #engl318mu