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If you're writing an MG or YA manuscript in first-person POV, I would encourage you to write it in present tense rather than past tense. Why? Two major reasons:
Reason #1: Writing the story in past tense suggests that the narrator made it through the ordeal safe and sound. Young readers stay more engaged when the outcome is uncertain.
There's science behind this. The prefrontal cortex, which is responsible for impulse control and future planning, doesn't develop fully until the mid-20s. Because of this, teens experience heightened emotional reactivity (not that you'd any official scientific studies to notice). That means teenagers often let immediate feelings take precedence over rational consideration of any future consequences, which leads to impulsive choices.
Social science also shows that the influence of peer pressure is stronger in teens than in other age groups, which means a lot of their decision-making is geared toward enhancing social connections. Predictably, these decisions are often short-sighted.
All of this is to say that a narrator looking back at an event is doing so with the wisdom of experience. It suggests that the narrative is being told in a way that maximizes an adult perspective (a.k.a. "Past Tense"). Writing in present tense highlights impulsivity and keeps the characters' actions framed by short-term goals. Adult brains are different from adolescent brains, and writing in present tense is a better match for a story ostensibly being told by a teenager (even when it's being written by an adult).
Reason #2: There's a chance that young readers will interpret past tense POV as the voice of an adult recounting a story from childhood. Adult narrators in kids' books can come off as preachy and unrelatable. Present tense assures young readers that they're reading a story from the perspective a fellow kid.
If a young person feels like there's a moral to the story, or that the book has been crafted to give perspective to the mistakes of adolescence instead of just living through them in real-time without judgment, they will struggle to invest. Adults can pass judgment on poor decision-making. Another kid, though, will look right past it. In short, present tense creates a more trustworthy narrator for a young reader.
Are kids making these observations consciously? Of course not. But can authors make conscious decisions about which types of narration they use? Of course we can :)
now this is great writing advice given in 1 min 15 seconds. I wish I could have shown this in my picture book plot lecture last week. Writers, pay attention! This is everything. https://t.co/k2y00CaElJ
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My analysis of the most popular genres, POVs, MC genders and more in 100+ middle grade books published so far in 2024:
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