全オン祭コラボ企画「ユーモアたっぷり賞」はれもんさん♪
イーオンから英語のアドバイスを紹介
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Some things for you to improve would be the "TH" and "L" sounds. Please try saying them while checking your mouth and tongue movements in a mirror.
全オン祭コラボ企画「思いが伝わった賞」は黒川さん♪イーオンから英語のアドバイスを紹介↓全文はFacebookにて
We recommend that you try to make your reading smoother. To do this, try to speak making your words blend together so that it sounds like you are reading sentence by sentence.
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Something you can focus on improving is your pronunciation, especially the "S" sounds, which you can easily find videos to help you with on the internet.
全オン祭コラボ企画「最優秀賞」はKuppaさん♪イーオンから英語のアドバイスを紹介↓全文はFacebookにて
The only tiny mistake we saw was in your sentence: "These papers are way smaller than it looks." It should be: "These papers are way smaller than THEY LOOK." (papers : they look)