@deepslowpanic Your writing is really good and one of the things that I notice in your chapters is they serve a purpose and feel complete each time. I don’t really notice the length I notice how the chapter conveyed the scene and moved the story forward.
@itsmegkehoe I end up hating my past self for my meal choices. Nothing makes me want to order out more than my pre-made lunches and dinners. Yesterday I ate trail mix and a stale muffin to avoid my carefully prepped lunch.