Bergen Sunday

Millersville University '21
Nerdfighter, movie soundtrack geek, and lover of words.

I was forced to be here.

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@QueenNiema6 I really like the tone and voice of your guide! It feels personal, accessible, and informal. #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@QueenNiema6 This looks good!! I’d relate it specifically to your space if you can, and make sure you don’t leave unfinished sentences! 😊 #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@vrenee16 Color! Fonts! How do you want to make your audience feel?? Look at spaces that have the same tone you want for your guide and use similar methods. #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@KeidalyzC I would personally make sure that you write a paragraph explaining your method, to tell readers that these summaries are verbatum from the video. If you do that it will make sense! #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@SnockDean What can you do to tie your project to the subject matter? If this is for sports media, can you use a font that makes the audience think of a related media space? Can you use a font that is similar to the sports illustrated font maybe? #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@DickerAlyssa Numbered list looks good, however if it was me I would make the headings stand out more, using bold or an alternate font. #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

I’m trying to use an instructive voice, (second person) for my writing guide. Does this make sense and seem to fit the purpose of the guide?? #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

I tried to explain my methodology in the research I did, but was having a little trouble figuring out why I did what I did. Do you see anything I should add?? #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@SnockDean I like that you identify small rhetorical choices such as punctuation and all caps! This can be easy to miss because we’re used to just writing for this class or other subjects. Good details sell the writing. #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@amjumbel Using Prezi for your guide is an excellent idea! It should make a good linear progression while also being visually memorable! #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@brianna_s2021 I definitely used separate documents for my items because I had to format them differently for each thing! #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@KeidalyzC I like the colors you chosen the pastels reflect the colors of the Tasty channel. I would maybe choose a brighter blue for the background to mimic Tasty, but I like it! #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@vrenee16 Using the tables sort of implies that each element is related to the next, and we don’t really know where to start. I’d maybe try and break it up a little? Also mix up color and fonts! #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@DevinRo37848647 I would start with a good thesis statement, summing up what you learned over the course of this class! #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

This is how I’m analyzing the elements of my content analysis. Am I making clear enough connections between the facts and what they mean? #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

In making content, I’m trying to write an effective caption. Does this caption provide enough information for you to know what the content pertains to? #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@adams_klayton A trick I use is to format everything in PowerPoint as opposed to word. It allows for more creativity. It might be too late for you to use this now, but maybe it will help you in the future! #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@PeytonMotter Smart! I wonder if using the same 280 character limit would be effective for you? Is there something magic about that number and our attention span? #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@jaesunrises Color and fonts have been my best friends!! Think about what choices your accounts (or related ones) make, do they use masculine or feminine fonts? Bright or muted colors? Then mimic it. #engl318mu

[Bergen Sunday @BergenSunday]

@hoagie_land Ooh, using sub folders is clever! I often make sub folders at the end of a semester to hold old work that I’m not ready to part with yet. #engl318mu