On improving writing:
Mimic, Then Innovate
Pick a writer you love, copy a paragraph of theirs by hand, then rewrite it in your own voice. It’s like tracing to learn drawing—you’ll start to feel their rhythm and eventually find yours.
Else - otherwise.
For all of these are translations into the visible of feelings else blind and inarticulate; and they are translations made with singular accuracy, with singularly little loss.
C.S, Lewis, The Allegory of Love
As regards - regarding
The placement of a preposition, then, is a matter for individual discretion in a given instance, and the choice of preposition is usually a more important concern, at least as regards stylistic effects.
Grammar as Style
I had that same question. I’m guessing whatever income you generate from the loan (assuming you’re putting it towards an income generating investment). But if it’s for personal matters, like buying a house, which you might do anyway, you get the benefit of a more favorable loan rate.
Promontory - a high, rocky ridge of land that projects out into a body of water.
To sail into an unknown spring, or receive one's baptism on storm's promontory, I know that that is better.
It’s really crazy that there is lots of money and girls locked inside your phone and you just have to figure out the sequence of buttons to press to get them out