@LitRPGforum I'm guessing that's for a D&D supplement. If it is, it looks fine, but you should ditch WotC and go with another company's games. You never know when WotC will try to go for your money.
@fabiaschi Back when I had my last gaming group, we had stopped doing level 1 game starts on games with levels. Doing yet another "we duh level 1 scrubs right off duh farm" got old. We worked with the GM for the game and build characters that had a little history prior to the start.