Go watch localscriptman’s (now HARTWELL THE WATCHER) older writing videos they have amazing advice for writing. Also after a point it does become psychotic because: psychosis.
@SpiralingMinty Blunt dialogue
Unclear focus
Non-existent conflict
Sarcastic tone in place of jokes
Obvious, unnatural exposition
Introduces way too many characters
Tries being self aware but isn’t
Clearly thought up as the writer went
Thinks it’s more clever than it is
You'll get better faster by just doodling for 20 minutes each day than you will by bookmarking any more tutorials.
Get off here and go be bad at drawing for a little.