One such clan they passed by was TornClan, a friendly group that lived on the sandy shores TrailClan were passing through on one of their many wanderings.
one of the biggest pitfalls of my writing that i've noticed is that every time i pick up my fic to work on it again, i take so long re-reading and editing the first chapter that by the time i finish and get to whatever comes after, i don't have time to work on it anymore.