Kevin Granfield

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

@Naveen17021214 you did a great job creating cohesiveness from page to page as each one on the menu logically flows into the next #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

@MattmichaelsE your homepage was really appealing and professionally laid out #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

Now that I have reviewed other sites I realize I need to cut out a fair amount of text and make my writing more differentiated in style from the CAP #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

Thank you @Naveen17021214 for giving me advice on how to change the voice of my writing to make it more accessible to a wider audience #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

Thank you @MattmichaelsE for your advice on how I can reorganize my homepage #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

https://t.co/syxa5z09VD I will hyperlink this as a counterargument #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

https://t.co/FE7VBHyHt9 I will hyperlink this as an example of a successful intervention program #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

@Chicago_Police would probably argue that law enforcement actions like illegal weapon seizure are a necessary part of ending gang violence #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

@FrGregBoyle would probably argue that the best way to combat gang violence is through intervention programs #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

What does our class/deadline schedule look like for the rest of the semester? #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

What is the difference between the writing/ ideas that we used for the CAP paper and the writing that will go into this project? #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

I am looking forward to learning how to make a visually appealing website #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

Hope everyone had a nice break and ate lots of good food #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

I think two modifiers I overuse are very and extremely. #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

One strategy for editing that I would recommend is edit your essay just a few paragraphs at a time and take breaks in between. This helps keep your eyes and mind fresh so you don't overlook anything #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

@nicolasengl101 @BEngl101 thanks for your feedback today! I appreciate the help and specific suggestions you both made to help my essay #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

https://t.co/Xq3XvT4z64 …
I never knew that there has to be a space in between each point of an ellipsis as well as before the ellipsis #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

https://t.co/OOHSyRxLTC … I never knew that APA citations use the year of publication as the in-text citations #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

https://t.co/JRM2Gpy6SA I did not know that you are allowed to shorted the title of a paper in in-text citations #lyra101

[Kevin Granfield @GranfieldKevin]

Lenzi et al. for humanities #lyra101