@KevinTr57796415 Hello Kevin, I like the photo you chose. I believe it will be extremely helpful in describing how airbags fail and why the recalls are important and how dangerous they are when flawed. #RHUB392
The below picture displays how the impact of the iceberg on the Titanic pulled and broke the rivets holding the hull together. This demonstrates how in the video some things are overlooked and not considered during the time of construction. #RHUB392
After reading this week's readings, I found it very informative on understanding the audience whether a client or management on information about a topic be. The structuring in both readings help convey this information so it is easy for the intended audience. #RHUB392
What I learned from 4.3 is that most of the writing done by students has been sequential and how we do our part of the project and don't communicate. this project will allow us to use reactive writing and be creative and collaborate. #RHUB392
After reading Lasts section on presentations, I found it helpful that she mentions how to observe others who are good at speaking in the workplace and analyze what they do and how they act. It is important to reflect upon these examples. #RHUB392
@victorreyesSDSU Hello Victor, I like how you mentioned "setbacks" as a failure is a learning experience that will give someone a setback but allow it to be changed or overcome in the future. #RHUB392
After listing to the podcast, I found it very interesting that the engendering students that do not make the best engineers are the ones with striate As. While the students barely passing can problem solve and not conform to what the teachers say. #RHUB392
In the readings I found it very interesting that the part about ethics in data was discussed and how it talked about sample groups. I believe this is extremely common in today's marketing of products and politics to persuade people. #RHUB392
@SeanAlfaroCunni Hi Sean, I think this photo does justice but maybe a description of locating where to poor the oil from the manual may be recommended or mentioning that the breather in classic cars is where one fills oil as it is not identified like modern cars. #RHUB392
A part in the readings that stood out was how to use precise wording. This was evident in replacing phrases and words with more action words such as strong verbs. Along with being short and simple with phrases/instructions. #RHUB392
@JonnathanS1821 I agree there are a lot of braking systems with drum and disk brakes along with different dot brake fluid. Along with no caution about the break dust and how it is asbestoses, many brake shops wet down the pads before removal to keep the dust out of the air. #RHUB392
After reading the brake pad instructions I found it to be less than informative. It is missing finding jack points, greasing the sliders with lithium grease, how to properly torque a tire, inspecting the rotor for wear, and not addressing different types of brake systems #RHUB392
Upon reading section 7.7 the biggest takeaway I got was organization and not writing in a passive tone. I have read enough instructions that are not clear and end up going to YouTube for more information. Illustrations are a must in any instruction guide. #RHUB392
@ShibleyZoeSDSU Hello Zoe, I believe you hit a very important matter, justifying what was stated in the paper or entry not only supports your clams but also makes it concrete reminding the reader the purpose and objective of the paper. #RHUB392
The lecture discuses recommendations for papers and topics. It didn't really occur to me how important recommendations are in a paper, the one writing a paper knows a lot about the topic therefore a recommendation is very important to others learning the topic. #RHUB392
@atran1998 Hello Anh, I really like this image because it shows how the heater core is too involved in the cooling prosses of motors. I believe this does a very good job of displaying the information that would be described in your paper. #RHUB392
This is an image I plan to use in my paper. It demonstrates a four stroke diesel motors components and visual aid to how power is created. This basic image will be helpful to display the rotation of the crank and movement of the piston itself along with the air flow. #RHUB392
In the readings for this week, I really like how it was discussed on how to use different ways for portraying information. The hierarchy, grouping, and sequence portion helped me visualize how to organize information along with other components such as color/line size. #RHUB392
@Cameron95802905 Hi Cameron, I believe this was one of the most important parts of the chapter. The description of a mechanism so the audience will understand will make the work more beneficial as well as appeal to more. #RHUB392