@OliviaDMTP@mccDMTP , I really enjoy the visuals and stats you showed, which shows a tremendous difficulty that is currently going on. I am intrigued by the precarity you studied and is more than willing to learn more about it. Really nice job!
@itsandia@mccDMTP , I think your video with open caption is a very nice touch. It helps to tell the story of a neighborhood with two sides, the overdeveloped and underdeveloped.
@SamantEmma , I think your words speak as strong as media would. I get a great picture of how bad the river's cleaning process is going. I think the idea of building a case study is very smart, doable and impactful.
@mt33881 @mccDMTP , Your cause and premise are well-established and the suggestion is actually quite practical. Great video with the use of orange and blue, It captures some really heartwarming spirit of the community that is trying to fight with gun violence.
@OG_Iancarlton@mccDMTP , Carlos I am so sorry that I missed your pitch. However, according to the tweets that was sent to you, I figured that you did a great job!
@mccDMTP@DestinyLLopez , Your pitch is well constructed especially with your response of willing to incorporate more faces. It is a brave act to share yourself as an icon and a even braver one to call for others to follow.
@mt33881 @mccDMTP , The presentation is very effective as you relate your personal experience and political conspiracies to portray how evil media could be as a tool in the wrong hands. Good job
@KaylaBullwinkel , I think you are very organized in terms of introducing the problem and proposing your way to solve it. I like the stats you provided.
@YongdanX, Your video editing is very strong. I love how you related your personal experience with Flushing. Keeping it a cleaner place resonates with me too.
@rwu_ny Your tone of voice is very calming and leading, which is quite persuasive in combination with the video. It is an experience with extreme sensual contrast. Great job!
@KaylaBullwinkel , I think you are very organized in terms of introducing the problem and proposing your way to solve it. I like the stats you provided.
@YongdanX, Your video editing is very strong. I love how you related your personal experience with Flushing. Keeping it a cleaner place resonates with me too.
@rwu_ny Your tone of voice is very calming and leading, which is quite persuasive in combination with the video. It is an experience with extreme sensual contrast. Great job!