@mccDMTP@MickeySantana11 the translation of the interview on the text while having the audio still in her native language was very effective in allowing an english speaker to understand her story
@mccDMTP@OliviaDMTP the visuals/asthetic of your presentation played well with the information and transporting the audience into the topic and the shops
@mccDMTP@DestinyLLopez you were able to tell such a personal story while showing how this can benefit other people and be used as a story to create change for a group
@mccDMTP @mt33881 your graphic shows how the methods media use to depict events are not from a centralized evil organization but from an general tactic used by all in the media network
@JocelyneEnriqu3@mccDMTP you did a good job telling the whole story of this issue. You did not just present the precarity but also how we got to this precarity to understand how we could fix it
@KaylaBullwinkel @mccDMTP by referencing what the organization you are talking to have already done makes it feel like you have done your research and strategically chose this organization
@YongdanX@mccDMTP using the sanitation department's own statement to justify your ask make it a powerful explanation for why this department should care
@rwu_ny@mccDMTP your tone of voice was serious and a slow pace, showing the seriousness of this issue, but your facial expressions and body language show the humanity and passion behind this
@OliviaDMTP@mccDMTP this piece connects well to your project and your satirical visual shows how black bodies are again stripped of control and assigned a value by non-black people
@mccDMTP@LoWong16 the contrast between the two definitions of free you give in the context of the internet because we do work and create things of value but to us it is leasure so it is exploitative