@RimYoora49964#peerreview3 In terms of thinking of ideas for the editing process between now and the final submission, I think placing the feed screen as a display that covers the entire screen space instead of the bottom right corner would establish sharper contrast between the 2 subjects
@sunita_bhowmikk#peerreview3 In terms of thinking of ideas for editing between now and the final submission, I would suggest displaying the names of parts of the brain (i.e. amygdala at 1:07 etc) more dispersed in between the depictions of child health and safety related content.
@alessandraa209#peerreview3 WOAH. I love this so much I was instantly sucked into the screen with the nostalgic subway surfers game. The contrast between the fun game and the poetry that dives into darker themes at times (i.e. skeleton) serves the perfect clash for an anti-lecture. Bravo!
@Adi_n1829#peerreview3 The project's message is clear in that it's an antilecture on the connection between social media and congolese refugees in the democratic republic of congo. I would just perhaps make the tiktok clips a little shorter or broken into smaller chunks that a dispersed
#hwa8 woah i never actually thought about the home as a fish tank that you can't really leave even though it feels like you leave it because you can potentially see very far outside of it through the windows of this so called "fish tank"
#hwa8 I think Patty's method of performing while writing the poem is such a genius way to get the creative juices flowing in the most raw and unpredictable forms
#painteddreams i like how the balloons and the charmin ultra strong and the plastic mini figurines are coming full circle together in one image in the video
#painteddreams I think it is very interesting how the grandmother plays the role of connecting the thoughts together when they seem to drift on their own individual journey of emotions
#painteddreams WOAHHHH I think that's the coolest visual transition I have ever seen in my life. The way they have Lisa Simpson in the back layer of the rest of the images just flashing and transition millisecond after millisecond