@sleepygirl2003 I think that the only thing to edit would be the volume control of this project, the narration is very quiet at times and gets overtaken by the music #peerreview3
@sleepygirl2003 I think that the third subject that emerges may be the overall commentary on behaviors that the King has that everyone else possibly has #peerreview3
@sleepygirl2003 This project does consider r/Reality as an agenda-based truth as it implies a negative opinion of the King based on emphasizing his bad practices #peerreview3
@sleepygirl2003 I think that the message of this project is to represent the King's relationships through the combination of ingredients that go into banana bread, with the bread representing the King's history with relationships #peerreview3
@209snoopy I think that the most important thing that this project should have is maybe more evidence in regards to climate change, for example maybe more visual aspects such as the sea level picture in the end #peerreview3
@209snoopy I think that the third theme that emerges in the end would be the theme of calling the viewers to take action as it shows the sea level rising. This provides heavy evidence and reminds the viewers that this issue usually is silent but should not be ignored #peerreview3
@209snoopy This project uses r/Reality as a form of agenda-based truth even if it does discuss a scientific phenomena as climate change is real but the importance of dealing with it can be viewed differently among people #peerreview3
@209snoopy I do not think anything needs to be cut, but I think that more evidence for the drastic changes in climate change should be added #peerreview3
@209snoopy I think that this project's message is to show the reality of climate change and how it affects the world, and it also shows the urgency of the matter through the narration style #peerreview3
@JoetaCha I did notice a third subject that shows itself towards the end as the narration switched from the theme of struggle to a theme of hope, which kind of matches the idea of success that is portrayed visually #peerreview3
@JoetaCha I think that this project does employ truth but an agenda-based truth as the narrator is talking about his perspective and struggles with OCD but also showcases a story of success #peerreview3