@JohnHaysRWS392 I agree John, failure is said to be the best teacher because it tells us what to be cautious of or avoid in the future. A smart man learns from his mistakes but a smarter man learns from others mistakes, that is why I believe it is so important for engineers to study failure.
@HavinWyatt Hey Wyatt our report has to do with a ship as well, but instead of using rivets the ship welded the metal plates and the cracks from the brittle fracture spread easier. These little changes are absolutely overlooked and can be devastating
#RHUB392 this graphic was going to be implemented into our report. This shows the differences between ductile and brittle fractures and shows the absorbed energy of each on a stress/strain graph. This shows how much less energy brittle materials can absorb before failure.
#RHUB392 The part that stood out to me in this week's reading was prepare your text for selective reading. Some people will only want specific details so it is good to use headers, bullets, tables ect. so that it is easy for the reader to find what they need.
#RHUB392 In "Collabrative Writer" I learned that the Sequential style of writing is more on par of what style my group and I will be using for this assignment. More asynchronous work as we all have busy schedules, and it is easier to organize.
appearance that you are not comfortable and are nervous. Another tip was to avoid speaking with low energy. Talk loud and proud of what you are presenting. #RHUB392
In "Oral and Visual Presentations" one thing I did was click on one of the links with tips provided and learned how to have better presentation skills. One of those is not being afraid of large movements and hand gestures. It is good to avoid small movement as it gives off the
Our reading this week had taught me about cherry picking information. Yes it may support your paper but it does not seem ethical. Omitting statistics that don't agree with your claims without telling your audience makes your your work not credible #RHUB392
@CMilleriii_F#RHUB392 I think that is the perfect image as it shows the numbered star pattern. I would be shocked if someone couldn't follow the given directions, when this image is present.
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I l used this graphic to show where to locate the information of how much pressure is needed to fill each tire. I wanted to use this because I wasn't really sure how to describe this area on the car. This way the reader can see the exact location of where it is found.
#RHUB392 One thing that stuck out to me was the usage of verbs. The reading gave me a good understanding of how to use strong verbs as opposed to weak ones and to avoid "to be" verbs such as "were" or "been". This lesson will help me write more effective sentences.
@JohnHaysRWS392#RHUB397 I have to agree with you, it really highlights how important visual aids are for many technical documents. I feel like it is the bread and butter to instructions as it shows what your saying.
I read the example of windows 11. Im not a computer person but the text gave clear instructions that were easy to follow while also providing images of what exactly what im looking for. felt it was organized and I liked the sectioning of it. It gave me some ideas #RHUB392
One thing that is crucial to writing instruction is clarity and the use of visual aid. Another thing that was interesting was the passive voice, I for one have trouble at time with this at times, and I know that this paper will help me with it. #RHUB392
@HavinWyatt Hey Wyatt, I totally agree, I for one did not know about recommendations until reviewing over this module. It makes sense that while we write these, we would have enough knowledge to provide a recommendation. #RHUB392
#RHUB392 I like that the lecture broke the conclusion into 4 parts, summary, limitations, recommendations, and justifications. The video made understanding the concept of writing technical data conclusions easier to understand.
@atran1998#RHUB392 Hey Anh, the picture is great as it shows where each component resides in the car. Do you plan on going into detail about what each component does and how it's functions correspond to the system as a whole?
#RHUB392 this is one of the pictures I was going to use for my paper. It is a broad look at all the components of the suspension system. I was going to use this to explain the basics of the system to show where they are all located.
#RHUB392 Something that I found interesting was the use of emphasis. This can be done by having something stick out over the rest. If we must use it sparingly or we risk the chance of over emphasizing, which may cause the audience to not focus on what is important.