@TiannaClore Aww these are so hard! But you've learned two really useful things:
1) your query is working (that's a HUGE win)
2) the pages might need another look
I had a similar response – it helped me stop fiddling with the query to focus on the pages, which was a turning point. Good luck!
So excited to announce that I'm now represented by @jennadol of The Unter Agency! And massive thanks to #PitDark for bringing us together. It's a step closer to seeing my YA thriller out in the world, and I couldn't be happier. 😊
@Laura_E_Foley I've seen it done well where the name of the POV is in the chapter title. Unwind by Neal Shusterman comes to mind if you want to read something that uses this... there's more than 2 POV but seems to work well. 😊
Sweet 16: Your 1st taste of freedom. At least that's how it's supposed to be. However, after Hailey's latent fire powers emerge, she finds herself trapped at a military academy that plans for her to not see her next birthday.
Party's over. Survival begins.
#PitMad#YA#FA#M
NANCY DREW x AGATHA CHRISTIE: Teenage detective Katelyn Elms tasks herself with investigating the suspicious death of a family friend. But as she gets closer to the truth, she finds herself at risk of becoming the next victim. #pitmad#BVM#YA#M
7yrs after her bro's drowning, Vera still blames Red Rock, the walled fortress she calls home. But when she learns he's alive on the outside, she only has 1wk to find the town's secret of youth before the gate closes for 7yrs, or leaving will cost her life. #PitMad#YA#SF#OWN
CINDERELLA+GONE GIRL+TO ALL THE BOYS
Ella is digging into her dad's 'accidental' death but someone is trying to off her before she uncovers the truth. Almost dying every other day won't stop her though. But boy trouble might... Where's the coffee?
#pitmad#YA#FTA#M#S#HA#LGBT
🏳️🌈 VERONICA MARSxONE OF US IS LYING
Welcome to Wysteria Hall Boarding School.
Where 16yo Brynn uncovers a 25yo murder, falls in love with the killers daughter, pledges a secret Society and solves her sister’s disappearance
Just another day right?
#PitMad#YA#M#OWN 4 #LGBT
SADIE x GOOD GIRL’S GUIDE
What the woods contain:
- Painful memories
- Solace
- A spot for a killer to hide a body
What Nat finds chasing the murderer:
- A strange tattoo
- A classmate’s wallet
- A boxing club
- Police corruption
- More than she bargained for
#PitMad#m#t#YA
THE BACHELORETTE x GOT (but wlw)
Iris is a bodyguard in love with the princess.
The princess is desperate to avoid forced marriage.
The victor of the ceremony wins the princess’s hand.
Prepared by legends of dark magic and brutal trials, she enters to compete.
#PitMad#YA#F
Rosalie is a little girl with a rather unique gift. She can communicate with the dead. When she befriends a young spirit who uses her hand to sketch her killer, lives are rocked forever when the finished drawing depicts Rosalie's own father staring back at her.
#PitMad#WF#P
STRANGER THINGS + FRUITS BASKET
13 y/o Elbert just wants to be a normal boy and stop bursting into flames. When he meets others who have their own "wild" abilities, he starts to question the origin of his curse.
#pitmad#mg#f#hf#mr
REBECCA x CRIMSON PEAK
Castle life is much easier than tending goats--until Anne's sister grows ill. To save her, Anne must find the cause: her sister's new husband, the prickly housekeeper, the handsome gardener, or the ghosts rumored to haunt the castle.
#PitMad#YA#H#F#P
His heart was shattered into pieces. Hers has never been whole. When a vicious threat forces them together, his care for her safety gives her hope she never had. But If he lets himself feel again, she'll hold the power to destroy all that's left of his heart #PitMad#A#RS#R#S
FOLLOW ME DOWN x CLUE MYSTERIES
16yo Nolan searches for her missing roommate and finds a killer. Seeking revenge for his expulsion, Tom plans to blow up their English boarding school on Bonfire Night, in a copycat crime inspired by the original Guy Fawkes. #PitMad#YA#M
6ofCrows x Fleabag
What happens when you toss two magicless, con-artist sisters & the world’s rarest spell into a city filled w/ paradoxical architecture + cutthroat, fashion savvy sorcerers?
Either the heist of the century or a recipe for disaster.
#PitMad#f#A#NA