Zachary Shaffer

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

I am going to record my presentation through the kaltura capture program available through MU video. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

My plan to revise my web analysis into a presentation is to distill it into it's main parts. What is the key info the LOHF needs. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

What is the best way to include images in the web analysis report? Are people placing them right by the text or using figures to refer to the images? #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

Is my LOHF banner across the bottom to much for each slide? #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

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[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

Is this introduction too much text to have on a slide?

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

Is the check and X here to cheesy? #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

Is it important that the text in my example image be legible? Is it too small here? #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

@KTN_TWIN I would recommend using a color on the headings to make them pop out a bit more. Nothing to drastic but maybe a nice navy or dark green. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

@KatieWe53788347 I don't think there is currently enough contrast between the bars and the background. I would go for a darker richer blue and a lighter shade of that yellow. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

@lilsalami18 I think if you label the X and Y axis using white text on the pink background and in the same typeface as the title that will help it pop a little more. Also pump up the point size to like half of what the title is. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

@Benjami05842344 If you embed the animation as a .GIF into your file it should still cycle through the animation when its opened. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

For the data analysis what are some tips in presenting data in a way that helps lead people to growth instead of focus on what they are not accomplishing? #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

For the data analysis how are people addressing the blog posts on the website. They mirror the post on other social media and it almost feels redundant when talking about them. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

For the data analysis how are people using the executive summary and introduction differently? To me they feel very similar. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

For the data analysis how did people present negative information in a way that doesn't feel like an attack? #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

@GroftAlexa I would consider getting rid of those boxes around the text. They make it feel restricted and it stops the items on the page from flowing together. I would also try a larger type size for the Introduction header so that it can grab the readers attention. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

@bmutt46 While I like the idea of getting the reader involved by asking questions I'm worried that they might feel insulted by these questions. They almost feel obvious. I think the reader will also naturally consider these questions when they read the paragraph above. #engl318mu

[Zachary Shaffer @ZacharyShaffe16]

@CMurgEngl318mu The sub headers like "Audience" could all be a larger type size and set above the paragraphs so that they stand out more. This will allow the reader to scan the page easier. #engl318mu