Lauren Walsh

graphics major at Millersville University. I love art, dogs, and baking.

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@RachaelLardani I have been kind of using our Content Analysis Project to connect all of my topics. I then will focus on reflecting forward. #writ318mu

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I will strengthen my essay by taking into account the feedback Dr P gave. I need to connect all of my paragraphs together to read as one cohesive essay. #writ318mu

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I am most proud of when I can finally say that my paper is done. I recently finished a big R&D project and when I can cross something off my list it’s very satisfying. #writ318mu

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What I like most about learning is when classes are able to connect ideas. Not just sequential connections, but when my art class can connect to my packaging class. #writ318mu

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What I like the most about my essay is connecting to a previous English class that I took. I like how the topics overlap and I can relate to it a little bit more. #writ318mu

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@mskurten_24 I am the same way. I write a paper but don't really revise. Ill look for any spelling/grammar mistakes but actual revision isnt really what I do... 😬 #writ318mu

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@IsabelRenee22 That's what I did! I took ENGL317 before this class and I think the topics covered definitely overlap. So I wrote a little about that in my essay. #writ318mu

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@IsabelRenee22 Agreed. Cuz then I feel like I miss something if I go to fast. #writ318mu

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@laura_sheaffer1 Same! I also reflected on a class I took prior to this course and kinda mentioned how the topics develop on each other. #writ318mu

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@DizzyLizzy0120 I'm glad I'm not the only one who made my essay personal. Then again its a reflection on what you have learned so I think it's a given. #writ318mu

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@DizzyLizzy0120 I think so! I like it! #writ318mu

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@mskurten_24 I like how you have almost a triangle going on here. The relationships between pondering ideas, writing effectively, and exploring new thoughts. #writ318mu

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@DizzyLizzy0120 So in a way it's good that I'm a sit back and watch kind of person. 😂 #writ318mu

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@_alyssadan_ I get easily discouraged when it comes to drafting. I can never find the right way to say something and often I get frustrated that it takes me so long to figure something out. #writ318mu

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@mskurten_24 I also need to think about everything I have learned in this class for the paper. Fortunately I think my twitter account has a good record of keeping track of what has happened this far. #writ318mu

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@DizzyLizzy0120 I like your definition of learning and how you tie it into critical thinking! #writ318mu

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@DizzyLizzy0120 I agree. Sometimes it's easiest to just throw something on paper and then make edits and add on from there. #writ318mu

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Learning is communicating ideas and letting people absorb and process them so that they can later put them to use. #writ318mu

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My writing process is about communicating in a way that people can understand. I try to convey my ideas and thougts in a way that I understand first and then move on to how I can help everyone understand. #writ318mu

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Writing demonstrates collaboration because when your ideas are communicated to others you are bringing them in for their additional thoughts, ideas, emotions, or opinions. #writ318mu