Jose Renteria

really made this for rws200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

The writing process for this essay has been a bit more difficult than expected. I know my topic very well, but structuring my essay and writing through the lens that I originally planned for, isn’t coinciding as well as I wanted it to #rhub200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

@megansmith812 This is a useful and effective image because it portrays your topic in a comic and comedic sense but also holds a lot of truth regarding our privacy.

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

@CameronHRWS200 I think this is an effective and useful image as it shows the people tend to follow celebrities and their opinions as proven by the number of retweets. This is evidence of the anti vax movement is supported by social media.

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

This is an image that I plan on using because it shows the immediate effect of gangs on children as they're forced at gunpoint to show what they learned. To them it's normal but at the time they were younger than 10 years old #rhub200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

The writing process for the annotated bibliography has been a bit confusing at times as I know the topic I want to talk about and have a personal connection to, however many of my sources sound a bit similar and I do not know if I'm using them correctly. #RHUB200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

High risk or highly affected neighborhoods to steer kids in the right direction #RHUB200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

Argument: Gang Activity in neighborhoods are detrimental to the psychological and social health of children and teenagers as they are more prone to succumb to abuse, gang violence, drug addiction, and other illegal activity. Therefore, more youth centers should be implemented in

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

@LlerenasKevin I think this is a interesting topic because I’ve always wondered as to why the government has been so hard on other drugs especially marijuana but still allows the distribution of tabacco products despite numerous health issues and complications.

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

@SowunmiElijah This is a great topic as many artist especially in hip hop struggle with major labels such like Lil Uzi and Playboi Carti struggling to release music because of restrictions placed by labels. Try to find how many artist create their own label to freely release music

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

#rhub200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

My writing process for this essay has been much smoother and easier since LaPierre shows multiple examples of demagoguery through out his speech. It’s also much simpler to notice who his intended audience and purpose for the press conference was.

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

#rhub200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

For this essay, I plan on talking about the effect of gang violence on the youth in Los Angeles as it's one of the biggest issues the city is still facing and something I've witnessed throughout my life. There's an article I found that elaborates on the psychological effects too.

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

@rusllmrtnz4RWS I agree with you. LaPierre basically tries to deflect any of the blame on the NRA and actually pushes his own agenda of being pro guns and put blame on mass media

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

@summmerra I agree that LaPierre doesn’t seem sincere and actually tries to blame the lack of guns for such tragedies thus pushing his own agenda of being pro gun

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

He does not seem sincere in his speech but rather only cares to reflect the blame away from guns to another scapegoat

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

Wayne LaPierre attempts to use this tragedy as a way to move his own agenda. He ignores the biggest issue at hand and uses it to point the finger at “gun free zones”. I don’t agree with his perspective as he never addressed the issue of guns and instead blamed the lack of guns

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

For the tragedy and gives examples on various places that have “gun free zones” and how they are so called targets for shooters. He blames it on the media,politcians,video games, movies, and other forms of entertainment for violence #RHUB200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

peer review did help collect my ideas and structure it properly into an essay that seems cohesive and consistent throughout. #RHUB200

[Jose Renteria @_joseee21]

The writing process for this essay started off surprisingly well as I was able to make a great intro to it. I did get a bit stumped after that as I couldn't figure out how to correctly present my ideas about the audience after first 2 paragraphs were fairly good. However the